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For the first time

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For the first time - by Anette
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I've never felt so hopeless, so stupid, so ugly.
Failure is everything I know,
But someone knew how to change that.

For the first time I look at myself and I like what I see.
I might be pretty like they once said.
I might not be as hopeless as I imagined.
Maybe I'm NOT that stupid?
You changed me. I never thought I could feel that way about myself.
For the first time I believe you.
For the first time I'm sure I can make it.
For the first time I have hope.
Ok, so I've been going through some tough stuff lately, and that sucked, but I have amazing friends who knows how to make a girl feel special and loved.

:iconyom100::iconfiesen3::iconoma2: + Matias and Lauren. You inspire me, I love you! :huggle: :heart:


Would someone be kind and tell me what you feel when you read my poem? Or what you think? Try to analyze it?... I'm really curious about what people actually get from these little pieces of texts.

Btw: I'm sorry about every mistake, this was done on my iPod kinda late :P
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Drawfantasy
I think this is a beautiful poem. I can feel all the emotions from the person who wrote it. Great job as always, Anette :D